No acceptable
Use of English
Task accomplishment
Use of present perfect

Too many things to practice still! You can do a better job in writing. Reading may help you to get familiar with structures and vocabulary. Try to write more and pay attention to your spelling. In addition, you probably made grammar mistakes and did not include any of the requested elements. Don’t give up! Good! You did a good job but you can do better. Pay attention to grammar forms and spelling. Your ideas probably weren’t perfectly organized but it is possible to understand your words. Finally, you probably didn’t include all the requested elements. Try harder! Excellent! Your writing is clear and it is easy to understand you. You probably made no grammar mistakes and included all the elements requested in the activity. Congratulations!