Criterion
Excellent
Acceptable
No acceptable
Use of English
Task accomplishment
Organization
Use of “it”

You need more practice – You can express ideas with simple structures. Nevertheless you need more practice. Well done – You can express your ideas and. there are still a few changes you can make but you are definitely on the right path. You have accurate structures and the coherence and understanding is quite good. The use of the structures in a great way and the speech is well organized.