1.You include his/her personal information
Tool 1
2. You include information about his/her family.
Tool 4
3. You use at least 6 different adjectives to describe this person
Tool 2
4. Your voice is clear.
Tool 3

Keep on studying – You need to practice more. Review pronunciation patterns and remember that speaking clearly and slowly is not always a bad thing. Well done – You can express your ideas at your own pace and your pronunciation is acceptable. there are still a few changes you can make but you are definitely on the right path. You have accurate structures and the coherence and understanding is quite good. The use of the structures in a great way and the speech is well organized. The rhythm, and intonation sound quite well and you only present natural pauses.