There are some aspects you should be careful. If it is necessary, study again the structure of the qualifying adjectives . Do not forget to answer everything that is asked and mention all the points that are required.It seems to be that you are getting better at qualifying adjectives; unfortunately your writing is not perfect yet. There are some points that you are forgetting about and checking the structure and vocabulary can help you make fewer mistakes the next time.Your writing is really good! There is always something that can be corrected, but you have learned to use the question words correctly. Excellent!