There are some aspects you should be careful. If it is necessary, study again the grammar structure, remember to use the verb to be as an auxiliary and the main verb in the –ing form. Do not forget to answer everything that is asked and mention all the points that are required.It seems to be that you are getting better at present continuous; unfortunately your writing is not perfect yet. There are some points that you are forgetting about and checking the grammar structures, punctuation or vocabulary can help you make fewer mistakes the next time.Your writing is really good! There is always something that can be corrected, but you have learnt to use present continuous in the right way in different contexts. Excellent!