CRITERIA
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Grammar and functions Tool 10
Vocabulary Tool 2
Coherence Tool 7

You need to pay attention on spelling and grammar. You can also increase your vocabulary to be less repetitive. You need to improve your grammar and spelling. It is no so bad at the moment but you can always be better. Excellent! Your writing is quite acceptable. You can always improve it but you are doing it very well so far.