ASPECTS
Yes
No
Part 1
You wrote the topic according to the instructions.
Tool 11
Part 1
You described your last vacation using past tenses (simple and continuous).
Tool 10
Part 1
You used the past continuous according to grammar and function.
Tool 5 - Unit 6
Part 1
You have grammar and punctuation correctly.
Tool 9
Part 1
You wrote between 60 to 100 words.
Tool 11

You are starting to write but there are some aspects you should be careful. Do not forget to answer everything that is asked, pay attention to grammar tenses and spelling. You are getting better at writings, unfortunately is not perfect yet. There are some points that you are forgetting about and checking the correct use of simple past or past continuous can help you make less mistakes the next time. Very good! Your writing is now acceptable. There is always something that can be corrected but you are certainly accomplishing what is being asked and you have also paid attention to the grammar aspects. Congratulations!