You are starting to write but there are some aspects you should be careful. Do not forget to answer everything that is asked, pay attention to grammar tenses and spelling.
You are getting better at writings, unfortunately is not perfect yet. There are some points that you are forgetting about and checking the correct use of simple past or past continuous can help you make less mistakes the next time.
Very good! Your writing is now acceptable. There is always something that can be corrected but you are certainly accomplishing what is being asked and you have also paid attention to the grammar aspects. Congratulations!