Tool 1
Yes
No
Part 1
You used simple past and past continuous in your story.
Tool 1
Part 1
There are at least four actions in present continuous in your story.
Tool 4
Part 1
Your grammar and spelling are correct.
Tool 1
Part 1
You used linking words to connect the sentences.
Tool 3

You still need to work on the fluency of your speech. You have the idea now it is time to organize all of them in a coherent way in order to express yourself clearly. It is also important for you to give the proper intonation to the sentence to give extra expression to your ideas. You are definitely improving but there are still some aspects you need to cover in order to make it perfect. It is important for you to avoid hesitation which comes after practicing a few times before you record yourself. Very good! Your speaking is now acceptable. There is always something that can be corrected but you are certainly answering what is being asked and you have also paid attention to the topic. Congratulations!