Your feedback: Excellent! You are doing a good job! Your writing is acceptable. You are accomplishing the task and you have also paid attention to the topic. You can express your ideas clearly. Congratulations! Your feedback: Good! You are about to become excellent! Be careful with some things: there are some points that you are forgetting about, check carefully the grammar structure in past to improve your writing. It is necessary that you remember how to use your adverbs and past structures. Your feedback: You need to work harder! You should go back to the lesson and do some reviewing. Try to study more your verbs and their conjugation, study again the grammar forms for simple past and improve your vocabulary. Don’t give up!