This was not your day! There are many things you need to improve. But first go back to the unit and study more to gain confidence and perform some repetitions to be more fluent. Hang in there!You could do better than that! You seem to have problems with your fluency. Try to do more practice before doing the final recording. Be sure you get familiar with pronunciation so you lose your fear to speak. You are almost there!Excellent! You took care of everything that was necessary to have a great performance in this exercise. Of course there are things that can be improved but you are in the correct way to success. Congratulations!