While writing, there are some aspects you should be careful about answering everything asked and required. Not responding or missing information will take points away.
You did a good job but you can do better. Remember to connect the ideas in your text using words such as “and”, “but”, “in addition”, etc. There are some mistakes in spelling, grammar and punctuation; be careful with those! Finally, remember to use the correct forms of “Will” and the simple present tense to write conditional sentences. Go back to the content page and study them.
You did a great job! Your text is well-organized and there is cohesion in your ideas. You made virtually no mistakes in grammar, spelling, and punctuation. You did a great job using conditional sentences to express your point of view. Congratulations!