While writing, there are some aspects you should be careful about answering everything asked and required. Not responding or missing information will take points away. You are getting better at writing; unfortunately, it is not perfect yet. There are some points forgotten about, and checking the grammar structures can help you make fewer mistakes the next time. Very good! Your writing is now excellent. There is always something that can be corrected, but you are positively answering what asked in the topic. Congratulations!